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The Winged Dance ©

Suddenly, today I stopped
In the most unexpected place
Amid the rush and turmoil
In the middle of the race

It seems the winds have changed
But people rarely seem to notice
The untamed song and dance
Found only in the wilderness

Windows open to the breeze
Softly caressing my face
Dogwood blossoms twitching
Playfully as the forest’s lace

In a rare moment, I caught sight
Of the yellow finch air-dance
To only the music of the wild
Fluttering fever of romance

Had I not stopped today
O how much I would miss
I would have missed their dance
With their mid-air kiss

They danced up into the sky
To the unheard music of the wind
Round and round in perfect pitch
Between the trees, wings ascend




Anyone finding my mind, please send it back to me. I will pay for postage.

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Registered:: January 11, 2001Report This Post
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This is really great, Hermie. It's one of your finest; or at least it touched me that way. I really love it. Great job!


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Registered:: April 07, 2005Report This Post
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I really like this one too Herema. I can visualize the scene in my mind with the sunlight coming through the leaves. Very nice.
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Registered:: November 26, 2003Report This Post
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hi HEREMA....I love it...nice work.
 
Registered:: December 31, 2007Report This Post
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Loved it as well Herema. Thanks for sharing.


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Registered:: January 18, 2006Report This Post
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I can visualize the scene in my mind with the sunlight coming through the leaves.


yes, it was quite a show! I could not believe chancing to see the birds doing something rarely witnessed. I have watched yellow finches before, but these two put on quite a show for me. They did the dance several times, too. It was on the end of a dead end street that I decided to stop and stare at the dogwood blossums.

tnx for the compliments, everyone.

lobe ya




Anyone finding my mind, please send it back to me. I will pay for postage.

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Website: http://lucindabilya.weebly.com
Blog: http://lucindabilya.weebly.com/blog
Twitter: http://twitter.com/lucindabilya
 
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